Hi Nally, I came across your profile and your story Masks Temptation really caught my attention
I like the emotional tone you’re going for, especially how you’re building that connection between your characters. It’s the kind of story readers easily get drawn into.
I work with writers to help refine their stories and make them flow even more smoothly, especially in romance where emotions and pacing really matter. I noticed a few small areas where your story could be made even more engaging for readers.
If you ever want a bit of help or feedback, I’d be happy to support you. No pressure at all, just thought I’d reach out.
Wishing you success with your writing ❤️