So... Like... MEEP! I have nothing I know to say...
Oh, I know! I'm reading your story, it's pretty dang interesting, but it's a bit lacking. There are spots of unaccounted time and some missing details. (Like how from chapter 1 to 2, not sure how much time went by, but I'm pretty sure she's not strapped to a chair anymore, I think.)
But me likie :3