Nameless_insanity

CHRIStianity

ImaginedWriter

So... Like... MEEP! I have nothing I know to say... 
          Oh, I know! I'm reading your story, it's pretty dang interesting, but it's a bit lacking. There are spots of unaccounted time and some missing details. (Like how from chapter 1 to 2, not sure how much time went by, but I'm pretty sure she's not strapped to a chair anymore, I think.) 
          But me likie :3