Namiechan

@rowlings like about rachael and nolan, how did they end up together...how about the vicky's father though.. And about luke i don't quite understand him..about his family not really been told in your story.. And the problem of his afraid to comitment is not clearly expression.. I dont know it seems i cant pinpoint the problem.. But it just something missing..Well dont think too much about it maybe it just me

would you mind telling me what you think is missing?

@rowlings no problems.. I think it's not such bad stories.. I like the story line..but i think there is something missing..but nevertheles its not bad..