Hey author, i like your work, I'm not an author myself yet aspiring to be but I AM a good reader. Although i like your work there are some key elements that i think is missing in the story, like don't get me wrong I'm trying to say that i can't feel the connection between me and the characters as i do in other works, to be specific- *punctuation marks*, *voice of the characters* (um how they speak you know loud or whisper or with disgust), and yeah nothing more. I think just adding these little things will enhance your story, English isn't your native language,right? Neither is mine, so cheer up, i hope this helps you : )