NancySim

Thanks. I love cats and dogs.

AE_KIrk

Hello,
          
          I'd thought I'd come and clarify my fictitious story as you seem to be under the impression that The Cursed Hill is real. I'm sorry but it's not :) Though it is indeed based on real events that took place hundreds of years ago, The Pendle Witches were in fact real people. However  Rick, Penny, Roger and the rest of the team are completely made up. Though you have hit the nail on the head Rick is arrogant but only because I wrote him that way.

NancySim

@AE_KIrk 
            Sorry! I know it is a story but I got carried away and wrote YOU instead of Rick. Your narration from the view point of Rick is fantastic.
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AnnWrites

Hi! @NancySim 
          Thanks for reading my book!
          Johor Bahru - in Malaysia right? 
          Looks like there's no end to wattpad bugs...I hope you still managed to read it...

NancySim

@AnnWrites 
            I love horror/mystery thrillers so writers such as yourself and SheHopes,Shimaira have my support. Yes, I was born and bred in this city.
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ValeriBeatrix

hi Nancy! thanks a bunch for your votes toward Vengeance,  Be Mine! So glad to see you enjoyed it! I'd love to hear your feedback in regards to the plot and characters.

NancySim

@ValeriBeatrix 
            Entertaining! I like Mia for being a strong woman. Didn't get why Nicolas didn't keep in touch with her if he loves her in the first place. Takeshi's sister is my least favorite character. Fancy fighting over a guy who wants nothing more than being friends with her. I hope Takeshi and Mia will end up together though. Will be waiting to read part 2.
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ValeriBeatrix

@NancySim  hi nancy! thanks a bunch for your comment. She only helps her uncle with one murder and she definitely realizes she's as bad, but for now, she isn't ready to stop. You are absolutely right that I should make it more clear as to how she knows people really are criminals. Again, at this point, she isnt really interested in the why...I am working on a part two...she has more of a conscious in that part, lol.
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NancySim

@ValeriBeatrix 
            Hi Valerie. Just wonder why is Mia helping her uncle commit those assassinations? She realize that doing such killings put her in they're same league as those who killed her parents. She has not looked into the matter of WHY her parents are killed but rather killed off those involved. How sure is she they are innocent of some illegal activities unknown to her. Then there is the relationship between Nicolas and her. BF or lover is even confusing for them. As for Takeshi, I really love for them to end up in bed and as a couple but I don't see any chance of that happening when those two guys find out about her side job. Feel bad for her as I don't see a happy ending coming though I still HOPE she will find her happiness. I like these characters that you created and the plot as a whole. Thanks for giving me a great time reading your book.
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