" as the Earth rotate, so did the time.. as my life keep on going but not my feet.. i stayed here in the mourning room, wondering about my future, then suffer by fears.. so dark i see.. yet, a glimpse of light shines.. far in the distant Fatamorgana.. God, how could i live on my life ? why don't you just take me to your ultimate realm ? .. shortly.. that shine.. that light.. that smile..those eyes... crafted a hope inside this dying soul, then i asked God once again.. God, who is she ? why did i'm so happy ?..... shortly.. i touched the light, i saw that bright shiny smile.. she said to me..... you are my reason to keep on living and searching..... Finally the dark lifted, the sun shines uncovering the happiness after the gloomy mist..... i said to her... Thank you.. for taking me away from the pit of misery, and drag me into your life.. i promise to keep you and my love forever "
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Nanda832
Sep 15, 2015 02:24AM
new to writting, need some advice or critics :D , thanks before !View all Conversations