Naptimewriting

Hey everyone! Thank you to everyone who took the time to read, vote, or comment on “How Milo Fletcher became a Murderer”! It’s reached 100 reads which is so exciting. The most anyone has ever read my work. I hope you’re all enjoying it!

Naptimewriting

Hey everyone! Thank you to everyone who took the time to read, vote, or comment on “How Milo Fletcher became a Murderer”! It’s reached 100 reads which is so exciting. The most anyone has ever read my work. I hope you’re all enjoying it!

stiles_cemetery

Howdy! I read through your story and I like it a lot! It's really good and I do hope you update again soon. I like the way it's written, but I would recommend putting thoughts and 'the voice' in italics. It would make it a lot easier for a reader to differentiate between the two. The grammar is really good (Definitely one of the most important things in a story) and I like the plot so far. It's a very interesting story. Thanks for the follow!

Naptimewriting

Thank you so much for reading and the votes. I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully you continue to as I’m flying by the seat of my pants here.
            I agree it would make it much easier and I have tried converting ‘the voice’ portions to italics but for some reason it only saves that way in a couple spots. I’m going to keep attempting to switch it to italics though so hopefully it’ll work for me. 
            I also read the first chapter of ‘The Midnight Zone’ it  intrigued me and I plan on going back to it once I have a bit of down time.
            Thank you so much and please feel free to continue to give feedback!
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Naptimewriting

Hey everyone! You may have noticed I republished the first few parts of ‘How Milo Fletcher became a Murderer’. I was unhappy with them so I made some changes. I’d love you read them and give any feedback you might have. Thank you!

RickAmburgey

Hi there.  Thank you for the follow.   I started reading your story.  I like your writing style.   I know it is unedited and I look over grammar errors in favor of a good story unless it is so bad I can’t understand what the writer is saying.   This isn’t an error, but you might want to put a space in between paragraphs.   It makes it easier for the reader to follow.   It also is less intimidating when the text is broken up into smaller pieces.

Naptimewriting

Hi Rick, thank you for taking the time to read a portion of my story and giving feedback. I am planning on going through and changing the format today. I discovered exactly what you’re talking about while reading other Wattpad stories. It feels like quite the commitment to a story I don’t even know I want to commit to. I appreciate you reaching out!
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