@WhiteTiger100 I know it seems like I jumped into the middle. But my character will reflect back to before then to explain more. The first chapters are just to show where she comes from, they play almost no part into the story as a whole. Thank you though, The chapters are short because I can't really type on my kindle, and when I was writing I also had very limited time to type, and very little idea how to get the character away from were she is. The chapters are very little detailed because even the character doesn't grasp what's happening to her. I appreciate your advice though. Thank you.