Sara

Thank you for a wonderful book ! Couldnt put it down ! I love the depth in the characters and the relationship between Haley and her dad. It’s fresh and not a cliche which I appreciate. 
            
            The relationship between her and Xavier I personally feel could’ve been developed more. 
            Don’t get me wrong, i love how their navigation into the relationship was so mature but i feel like it advanced too fast. The final chapters and events even though they were beautifully written and captured. Happened all too fast. 
            Or maybe thats your preference and I’m used to loooong stories lol 
            
            But nonetheless, i loved the book and definitely added to my favorites of worth reading again !!

Thanks .. i like my taste in books too 

@Narvozam Wow your back! You've been here since 2012. You're a pioneer. You should have hundreds of authors knocking at your door!  Hope you are staying safe and looking after your self. RK.

@The-Scrivener  i should be sending the hugs  i loove this book.. not into sci-fi that much but maan you won me over .. I didn't get anything in the beginning but im catching up.. literally love everything about it.. the humor the plot twists the sarcasm ..  thanks for a wonderful story and keep up the great work  *sending a box of flowers and brownies back* 

@Lycan26 dont mention it ! I wouldnt be doing you any good if i lied to you .. im glad that you take criticism well and i only mean it in a constructive way you know? I dont mind editing at all ! Im glad you didnt take offend because usually when writers contact me wanting me to read their books .. and theyre full of grammar and spelling mistakes and i tell them that and offer helping  out they take immediate offense and think im rude which i assure you im not ! Anyways lol please contact me if you need help with anything ! I mean im no Shakespeare but a fresh set of eyes can be really helpful ! Especially when you've been writing for a long time and you dont wanna go over it again .. lol i literally do that with allll my essays  anyways sorry for the rant but yeah ! I hope this is a start of a nice friendship 

@Narvozam Thank you so much for this! It really mean a lot to me. I really need a honest opinion and you just gave me that. And I really agree with your opinion about my grammar and spelling mistake lol.  And don't worry, your words didn't offend me or anything lol I really appreciate it... And about helping me editing it? Sure, why not? I mean I really need help and if you're not trouble with it then yeah. Thank you so much! I'm very grateful to you :)

@Lycan26 hi :) it has an interesting plot .. im all about fantasy dragons and worlds and i literally can never find a good book that has them, so you got me there ! but the grammar and spelling mistakes really makes it difficult to read since im a grammar/spelling Nazi  it also turns off alot of readers since it becomes too confusing to read you know? I know it's unedited but it's always good to start the story that way especially first few chapters so you get alot of readers.. and that genre isnt as popular here as the other ones i noticed.. so you really need to polish it a bit more .. im sorry if i came off too strong i really have your best interest at heart. And i would gladly help you edit it if you want  

@Narvozam hi.. sorry i actually deleted that one. im working on one right now and itll be up early January.. if you would check that one out that would be awesome!! :D

@beautyofwar hey , theres nothing there