NasuadaNightingale

It seems I forgot to announce the 2nd chapter of TGOAAER, so if you haven't read it, I suggest you go give it a try.
          	
          	Now onto other news: The 3rd chapter is already underway and at about 3000 words so far.
          	
          	Each new chapters makes me more convinced that TGOAAER might be my Magnum Opus, rather than it being Petals Shorn.

jasongleimspray

Question may we get a update on anything it's been a bit or has your spark tuckered out of new ideas and ways to write your stories forward right now

jasongleimspray

@jasongleimspray also is their a chance you can attempt to work on your grimm gamer ruby book rewrite or continue it as it's idea is great but their are not many I have found that do it decently 
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jasongleimspray

@jasongleimspray I agree with you I was just curious on progress work at your own pace and quality as to me that gives stories the best "life" to them
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NasuadaNightingale

@jasongleimspray I've been working on TGOAAER for a while, but I've gone through about 5-6 drafts of one segment in particular.
            
            I might swap to working on Petals Shorn so I can get a breath of fresh air. There's no point in rushing the TGOAAER if it causes a drop in quality.
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NasuadaNightingale

It seems I forgot to announce the 2nd chapter of TGOAAER, so if you haven't read it, I suggest you go give it a try.
          
          Now onto other news: The 3rd chapter is already underway and at about 3000 words so far.
          
          Each new chapters makes me more convinced that TGOAAER might be my Magnum Opus, rather than it being Petals Shorn.

PUTINGBULBOL

Here’s something to laugh at @NasuadaNightingale, so funny ,link is down ↓

NasuadaNightingale

@PUTINGBULBOL Really? A double-layered link that has a .ly address? You're gonna have to try harder than that...........
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NasuadaNightingale

Progress is marching onwards for the next TGOAAER chapter.
          
          It's been slow due to me experimenting with a few new writing techniques, particularly that of accurately describing military weaponry and the terms linked with them.  Getting everything right is taking quite a bit of research to pull off.
          
          This latest version should really put out the idea that it isn't just Ruby changing; it's the entirety of Remnant having to change with her to survive the tumultuous era they have found themselves in.

godcatfoxdogspider90

in the the god of agony who is in the herm?

godcatfoxdogspider90

Mabey try one lover at a time see if you are up for it or no it is your choice.
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NasuadaNightingale

@godcatfoxdogspider90 Weiss & Blake for now. I had plans for others in the older versions, but I'm not sure if I should include them in the new version since I feel they'd be shoehorned in far too much.
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NasuadaNightingale

I've been trying to work on the TDOBI rework and realized that I have no desire or drive to do it.
          
          TDOBI had been made at a time I had been struggling to control all the thoughts and emotions that had been bouncing around in my head. Now that I know exactly who I am and why I was struggling so much at that time, I can't reproduce the pure emotion that went into that series.
          
          I cringe at all the grammar mistakes and how much worse my writing was back then, but I do remember fondly the amount of soul I put into it.
          
          I think TDOBI is better left as a sort of time capsule for both myself and you all to enjoy.
          
          Now as for TGOAAER, that is getting it's final touches done tonight and should be ready for release after I wake up later today.

NasuadaNightingale

Rough draft on the first chapter of TGOAAER is finally done, but it will need some polishing. I had a bit of writers block for a week due to trying to figure out how I wanted the visuals to be made.
          
          I've also altered certain details. Atlas won't be helping Ruby at all and she will be alone for much longer. I'm planning on having her be alone for the first 2-3 chapters to really cement in the despair she will be suffering from and the mental fight to combat that despair.
          
          Now I'll need to work on TDOBI rework since I said I would be reviving it at the same time I'm working on TGOAAER.
          
          These two series are the most influential on my writing style. TDOBI taught me how to delve into darker subjects and how to write the sinister half of the human psyche, while TGOAAE let me stress the importance of balancing the dark with the light.
          
          Everyone has their demons, but the true struggle is learning to master them....tame them, instead of outright disregarding them.
          
          Let me once again ask, in what is my opinion, the most important question that you will get in life.......
          
          Do you know who you are?

NasuadaNightingale

@deadhorsesvalley You kind of already are when you read my books.
            
            Along with the intellectual questions I pose, I also tend to sprinkle a bit of my own experiences and personality into my characters.
            
            Shin Ruby is my drive to keep moving forward in spite of anything that stands in my way. PS Ruby is my desire to achieve things that will stand out and she inherits my broken sense of morals. Ruby Lucifer and TDOBI was my way of dealing with the madness and anger afflicting my mind at the time I wrote that story.
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deadhorsesvalley

@NasuadaNightingale you are a specimen dude I'd study you
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NasuadaNightingale

@deadhorsesvalley Perhaps one day you'll understand.....or maybe you won't.
            
            Very few know themselves to such a degree as I do. It takes a lot of introspection and hardship to realize what you have been, what you are, and what you could be.
            
            Defiance fits me so well since it's encapsulates the trials I've went through, the years spent honing various skills in spite of others calling them useless, and my utter contempt for the very notions of fate, perfection, divinity, and complete subservience.
            
            The idea of an all-powerful deity that can dictate someone's entire life from beginning to end........that particular idea boils my blood like nothing else. If I were meet Yahweh.....let's just say I would call him plenty of colorful names......
            
            Even if I lived for a thousand years, I doubt my core nature would change all that much.
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