NasuadaNightingale
Hey all! I'm still alive.......somewhat. I've been thinking about TGOAAE for a while now and how.........lackluster it is compared to the complexity of Petals Shorn. Petals Shorn has incredible depth to the story with how few chapters it has. Each character has their own aspirations and agendas, they struggle with how far they are willing to go to achieve those goals. ..........While TGOAAE seems to more just be action, depression, and the occasional horror sequence. Would yall prefer if Ruby didn't join Beacon, suffering alone and having to remain in her *God* form? The humanoid form doesn't seem to work all that well if she's still just as strong as her God form. If yall have any suggestions, send them my way, because I don't feel like I can continue TGOAAE if it continues to be so lackluster.........
boredteenager243
@NasuadaNightingale I say keep it but make it unstable. She could end up killing the majority of beacon which would give her a new reason to suffer alone as she killed the people who tried to help and her sister.
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jasongleimspray
@NasuadaNightingale well I think they god form needs to go but maybe make her like 15-25 ft tall so she still big hard to hide and yeah the suffering should be more lonely but maybe she should have like one person to help as I think she would become too depressed if she was completely by herself
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