Bia_257_54

Hey I just something to say about "Fire and Ice" it's very good amazing and what I'm going to say I hope you don't take it the wrong way, the story and plot twist is just amazing but there is just a few mistakes on the writing I understood everything but if you could see and maybe correct some of the mistakes would be amazing, again I'm not saying anything to make you upset I really loved your story can't wait to read the rest of your stories  I hope you don't take my message the wrong way <3

Bia_257_54

@Bia_257_54 I completely understand, I will come around again I'm sure of it 
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Natalia9522

@Bia_257_54  thank you so much. You know as big as my imagination I've been finding it hard to write lately and I have this one book I started but haven't continued and its waaay different from the ones I've published because I'm older now, wiser I'd like to think and it's pretty...real. Real as in life and love and death but who knows I might just get back to it 
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Bia_257_54

@Bia_257_54 oh okok that's good even though you're young your imagination was and probably still is amazing 
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AlaikaAverynoodles

Ayo!!!!! Waz up bitch...u r finally done so I can finish reading it

Natalia9522

@AlaikaAverynoodles guess we starting from A
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AlaikaAverynoodles

@AlaikaAverynoodles like I don't even remember where I was
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Natalia9522

@AlaikaAverynoodles now if you were keeping up..you'd have seen I finished it years ago ..ages 
            
            Anyway you see the growth  tho like What!!!!
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