daddyexpectationsx
hey! could you please check out my new book and comment+vote on it? thanks it means the world to me!!
NataliadreamerM
NataliadreamerM
Hey guys! So, my dear readers who are reading and following my story aka IF, I'm sorry for taking so long to update but the next chapter is simmering on low heat, in other words it might take me another week to post it so you guys could read it, again I'm sorry for the delay but I'm just super busy with school and stuff. Remember that I love you all! Xoxo--Talia-who-wants-to-find-enough-time-to-finis- the-chapter ♥
iirridescent
Hi Talia, remember me? Yeah, so, this is coolpeople123 and I recently read your story. Since you asked for my personal opinion, I think your story was great but you need to double check the grammar and the repetition of so many words. You have used words such as 'forever' in parts of the story where it shouldn't be. That's not the reason I don't vote, though. I gave your story a chance at one point, but it was just so predictable. You can make a story predictable, but try to make some cliffhangers to make people want more of your story. I think this will improve your book. Anyway, good job and keep updating because it seems that many people have been enjoying the plot.
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NataliadreamerM
@ coolpeople123 And i can assure you that the story isn't predictable you just have to stick with it, it's not a cliché romance it just starts like that but it's not.
NataliadreamerM
@ coolpeople123 thank you so much for giving me your opinion it helps a lot ! Eglish isn't my language so it's a challenge for me to write in it, i'm considering all your remarks and again thank you for being truthful with me
Xoxo--Talia <3
LilBaddies
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NataliadreamerM
@BayanZaaaxD no prob ;)
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anklestrings
so you are from Algeria? i didn't know that Algerians speak french, :)
NataliadreamerM
@Scribbles- north Africa, it's bordered by the Mediterranean sea from the north, Morocco from the west, Tunisia from the east and Niger and Mali from the south
NataliadreamerM
@Scribbles- yup i am! and yeah we all speak both Arabic and French since we've been through a French colonization period so French is like a second language for us