NatashaSharma

This is the link for the poem, please do read: https://my.w.tt/EKukgpyDh8

NatashaSharma

Hello, I have a new poem out after a long while "Maulla Yeh Kaisi Reet Hai." It's about women empowerment and a little criticism of the traditions set by society. It's also written in English script but uses Hindi words, so if you need a complete English version, let me know but I hope you like it

StellaShimmers

Hi! I'm new and I want you to critique my poems. :) You'll find it in my profile>works>rainbow collection I have eight so far.

NatashaSharma

We will continue in the summer and can only do two at a time. Thanks again.
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NatashaSharma

Please do not post on my message board. I have a Seperate account : @randombuddies with my friend. So please post there with the direct link. Thank you
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ScatteredStardust__

♥ Give this heart to everyone you don't want to lose in 2014 including me if you care. Try to collect 12 it's not easy!  You have 20 minutes to see what happens in 30 minutes!  Be honest and send this to everyone who made you smile this year.
          
          (( Hey!! Hope you're doing alright ^-^ Have a lovely New Year's Eve ))

NatashaSharma

Of-course :D I do agree with you. However, every person should think before they act and calm their sense of revenge as wanting to take revenge can have a lot of negative consequences as it can be taken quite far and this could be reason for bad actions.
            thank you.
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ScatteredStardust__

@NatashaSharma 
            
            Yes, and as we are all different, we are all bound to think of it differently. 
            Indeed, some people do use the past to learn from their mistakes, and by others dwelling on their past, they never get over it. They end up living in the past, and never waking up to see the world for how it is.. And agreed, some bad guys do become good. But something, something changes them. Whatever did would have had to have been a powerful thought, emotion, scene, else they would have never changed.. True, sometimes having to see all that hurt, will stop them, make them a better person. This is because of their conscience. They realize that that is wrong, and change. While others hurt and kill with no remorse what so ever. In that case, most times you can look back at their past and understand why they are the way they are.. People always have a bit of good. That is why they can be swayed.. There is something that would make them realize that it is bad, had they been presented with that opportunity. And that's a great motto xD
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NatashaSharma

@ScatteredStardust__ 
            yes, exactly, it all depends on what we choose to do, how we choose to be, how we choose to think of it.
            Some people use the past to learn from their mistakes, some people become strong, yet some people choose to dwell in it. And it also depends on the person's strong will. Bad guys when given the proper guidance to and once they understand the pain the victim undergoes, I am sure they will change and do good. And also no one is fully bad or fully good its only their behaviour that is bad or good, (my grandmom's teaching) Yes, always smile and make people smile : my motto and see the good in all will make your heart soft and warm.
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