Hey! I like your book but it's a little bit childish and the content or the things that's happening is not explained well. And girl take your time while writing for it to be more understanding to be read. By the way the conversation, you need to put names of the people speaking, and the feelings, I actually did not feel any of the characters emotions. I don't want to offend you or something but I just wanna help you to make this story more understanding. You can ask me for some ideas or advice if you will write a new one. I kinda write stories as well but I just don't publish it. Hope you read my message and hope you a good luck