What I would appreciate is people Bothering To Proofread their feckin stories!
I spot so many ignorant and stupid errors, while it be poor grammar (fan favorites apparently) and/or poor wording so therefore the sentences makes no feckin sense.
If u want to make fan fic, or any type of story really, then do us all a favor, mainly me, go back, proofread, and fix any and all errors. Thank U.