Great ideas, incredible writing technique. Your plot is so tightly knit, it keeps everyone on their toes. You should really continue with this book. Thanks.
I really loved your short story: This is how you die! Very interesting, but now I'm glad that I'm oblivious to how I'm going to die :) I'd go mad with paranoia if I did.
Hello, please take a peak at my first story I am new here and I love to write, can you personally give me a review and ideas on my new story? Thank you. I would really appreciate.