@OkechukwuMuoghalu Thank you for sticking it out even though there were problems. Sorry for the whiplash, originally when i began writing this story, I was only going to kill the brother, but there were too many unresolved issues that I couldn't ignore. So to fix those issues I just killed them all. I agree that it needs to be revised heavily.
Initially, I was studying to become a pharmacist, I had good grades but couldn't pass my anatomy lab due to the fact that strong smells can make me pass out. No matter how many times I attempted it, I couldn't finish the work or exams in that lab. I switched my studies to chemistry.
I am a huge space and future tech nut, and it drives me crazy when someone gets blown out of an air lock, I mean where was all air coming from to create that much friction to move that much mass so quickly? Anyways, I felt obligated to research the science as best as I could.
I have eaten Fufu before, but it was here in the states so I don't know how close it actually was to the native dish. I lived in Thailand for a year and I am fully aware of how Thai food is served here compared to in Thailand.
Thank you again for reading this story.