NathanielItoro

Chapter three of the wealth is mine is out. Please comment and correct me if there's error 
          	I just published "The investigation deepens " of my story "The wealth is mine ". https://www.wattpad.com/1499534199?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=NathanielItoro

NathanielItoro

Kindly read and correct me please. Does it have a good pace, cliffhanger and plot twist? I will be happy if I'm guided. Thanks in anticipation.
          I just published "The Missing Father " of my story "The wealth is mine ". https://www.wattpad.com/1498576127?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=NathanielItoro