Natsu433

As you can see, I’ve made some major changes to The Legend story. I hope you enjoy them, and I’d really appreciate your review and any suggestions you may have.

RagnaKH

@ThePlayer52O9 Well, if only his Intimidation ability would make many people fear such a Fire Dog.
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ThePlayer52O9

@RagnaKH doesn’t it have intimidate
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Natsu433

@RagnaKH well we still too far away from chunin exam but i will keep this idea in mind 
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Aclux1

Hello Natsu

Aclux1

@Natsu433 qFor Legends, I would like to propose not to put Naruto paired with Mikoto, Tsunade, Kurenai or Shizune or even Kushina because the age gap is too big and also because such pairings are monotonous and repetitive (already used in various stories)..... also I would like to avoid Naruto forgiving and getting together with Hinata, Satsuki, Ino and those who betrayed him......such betrayals cannot be forgiven
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Natsu433

@Aclux1 Thank you For your review 
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Aclux1

@Natsu433 sorry for the delay, network problems.....anyway I wanted to tell you that your Naruto Legends and Dragon Slayer stories are excellent, magnificent I must say
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Natsu433

As you can see, I’ve made some major changes to The Legend story. I hope you enjoy them, and I’d really appreciate your review and any suggestions you may have.

RagnaKH

@ThePlayer52O9 Well, if only his Intimidation ability would make many people fear such a Fire Dog.
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ThePlayer52O9

@RagnaKH doesn’t it have intimidate
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Natsu433

@RagnaKH well we still too far away from chunin exam but i will keep this idea in mind 
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Natsu433

I’ve finished rewriting The Shinobi Dragon Slayer and am about to start The Legend. I’m making significant changes this time around, including the removal of several subplots and relationships.
          
          ​Much like my Dragon Ball fanfiction, I want this story to be action-centered rather than harem-centered. While there may be romantic interests, they will be strictly sidelined to keep the focus on the main plot. I hope you’ll support this new direction, and I look forward to sharing it with you!

D3m0nRulerz

@Natsu433 it's still an amazing story keep up the good work  
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