Natsu433

Only five chapters remain to be rewritten in The Shinobi Dragon Slayer. After that, the next story will be The Legend, as it received the highest number of votes. The Spider-Man story will have to wait a little longer.
          	
          	While rewriting, I realized something important: both The Legend and Spider-Man (especially Spider-Man) have some rushed parts. In The Legend, there are too many romantic partners, which feels excessive. In the Spider-Man story, relationships progress unrealistically fast—entire relationships are completed within a single chapter. This doesn’t look good and doesn’t feel right either.
          	
          	For The Legend, I’m planning to reduce the number of relationships. I also don’t want to write adult scenes; I’ll focus only on romantic moments. The plan is to limit the main relationships to four girls. You’ll get to choose who they are through voting. If the votes strongly demand it, I may increase the number to five, but no more than that. Mito and Natsumi are not options.
          	
          	As for Spider-Man, I’m planning major changes—adding new elements, removing others, and revising some choices I previously made to make the story more appealing. When I begin rewriting it, I’ll unpublish the entire book and start writing it again from scratch.
          	
          	What do you think about these decisions?

JonBluedragon

@Natsu433 if not hana then anko
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JonBluedragon

@Natsu433 i feel like to keep the original romantic partners but if not the the five romantic partners i feel like is (kushina mikoto tsunade kurenai and hana inuzuka) i feel like they are perfect romantic partners.
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Brandon130463

Hey you doing great at rewriting the story
          
          That inspired me to try to create some crossover or a story that would make feel or look like the actual thing or scenario 
          
          I hope you’re doing alright,  do what you do and take your time, as well as have a great day 

Natsu433

@Brandon130463 thanks, same to you 
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Natsu433

Only five chapters remain to be rewritten in The Shinobi Dragon Slayer. After that, the next story will be The Legend, as it received the highest number of votes. The Spider-Man story will have to wait a little longer.
          
          While rewriting, I realized something important: both The Legend and Spider-Man (especially Spider-Man) have some rushed parts. In The Legend, there are too many romantic partners, which feels excessive. In the Spider-Man story, relationships progress unrealistically fast—entire relationships are completed within a single chapter. This doesn’t look good and doesn’t feel right either.
          
          For The Legend, I’m planning to reduce the number of relationships. I also don’t want to write adult scenes; I’ll focus only on romantic moments. The plan is to limit the main relationships to four girls. You’ll get to choose who they are through voting. If the votes strongly demand it, I may increase the number to five, but no more than that. Mito and Natsumi are not options.
          
          As for Spider-Man, I’m planning major changes—adding new elements, removing others, and revising some choices I previously made to make the story more appealing. When I begin rewriting it, I’ll unpublish the entire book and start writing it again from scratch.
          
          What do you think about these decisions?

JonBluedragon

@Natsu433 if not hana then anko
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JonBluedragon

@Natsu433 i feel like to keep the original romantic partners but if not the the five romantic partners i feel like is (kushina mikoto tsunade kurenai and hana inuzuka) i feel like they are perfect romantic partners.
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Natsu433

I’m about to complete the rewrite of Shinobi Dragon Slayer, and it should take around three more days. After I finish this story, which one should I pick next to rewrite?

demonstorm95

@Natsu433 the legend and the rewrite is a work of art
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JonBluedragon

@Natsu433 the legend please and can you update it too like to know what happens next
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Siddharth0714

@Natsu433 Peter Parker with ultimate login system
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Natsu433

The Shinobi Dragon Slayer's chapter 1 to 10 Rewrite is done 

Natsu433

@Natsu433 yes I want to Rewrite all of my story to make them atleast bearable for reading. I know, I am terrible at Grammer.
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Siddharth0714

@Natsu433 are you planning on doing the same thing with the other stories?
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Natsu433

I already started to Rewrite The shinobi Dragon Slayer.

Brycie10

@Natsu433  nice one, and I was thinking, are you about to keep updating this story since last year as well as the other stories?
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Natsu433

"Hi everyone! How is everyone doing? I’m aware that my past fanfiction has some flaws, particularly regarding grammar. Because of this, I’m currently in the process of rewriting all of my stories one by one to give you a better reading experience."

RameshParab

@Natsu433 I have a suggestion for your stories 
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Connor171

I thought you were done

Connor171

Cool does that also mean you looked into your other stories as well
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Mini050

@Connor171 so you gonna update any old fics
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Natsu433

@Mini050 maybe, i just has some idea while watching one piece latest episode then i why not write oneshot as for my older stories i will think about it 
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