Natsukiissimp

Hi everyone! I just published the new chapter of Morosis! I apologize for the wait and thank you guys for being so patient with me! Hope you enjoy! <333

sorrowzai

genshin or honkai serious question

Natsukiissimp

@sorrowzai uh oh x_x
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sorrowzai

@sorrowzai then u get executed
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Natsukiissimp

@sorrowzai What if I haven't played either (T0T)
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LoloXtale

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Just to tell you, I think your story Alamort  was going to be another bullshit and cringe creepypasta story. But I was surprised when it wasn't, it has all the tropes needed to make a good creepypasta story, the characters are complex and not ALWAYS overly attached to the reader (like Ben for example), or are not showing it. And it's not another bullshit thing where you magically get teleported in an all-creepypasta school and the reader is cringe and blah blah blah. I especially like that not every character is introduced at the same time but little by little. However, I wish you would make small parts where we can read about how the creepypastas's life is going on after not being saved. Like, how is Jeff doing? How did he meet Slenderman? Or did he even meet him? Maybe more external stuff where you can observe everyone's feelings and stuff (if u want, I can help u with that, only if u agree lol, I just find your story incredible and wish for it to become even better). But truly, you made me go back in time with it all, I'm back when I was 13 and reading creepypasta stories on Wattpad. Truly missed that era. And the issue with today's creepypastas books is that it's TOO mature. Or too focused and distorted to make a good story (it basically doesn't have funny moments and lighthearted stuff too), and it's always an enemy to lovers kind of thing (I mean, I get it, this trope's amazing but well too overused).

LoloXtale

@ Natsukiissimp  aww thank u!! I'm happy it made your day, that was the whole point lol. Especially since I don't praise people easily. But yeah, maybe I'll post other messages just to give you small tips in your writing there and there that I think are really essential to make your story better. And again, you are really good at writing! Better than most of the creepypastas writers I've found out there. Hope the chapter comes out soon! ^^
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Natsukiissimp

@LoloXtale Hello!!! I love your comment so much, it seriously means so much to me! <33 Seriously, you're praise makes me so giddy and happy to write ( 〃▽〃). About the snippets on the creepypastas that have parted ways, I'll keep what you said in mind, I'll probably add little bonus sections at the end of chapters, or come up with a different plan overall. Thank you for your offer to help me out, Im so honored that you want to help me continue my writing journey, but I think I'll stick solo for now, but now I know that if I ever need help I can count on you! Thanks again! <3, Your praises and criticisms do not go unnoticed! I cannot stress enough how much this made my day ＼(^-^)／. I appreciate your support and praise! Much love from me to you (o≧▽゜)o <3
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LoloXtale

@ LoloXtale  And when it is written in a way that I find nostalgic and stuff, it's basically someone that wrote something cringe with short chapters and that don't know what to do with the characters except making them obsessed. And truly, I'm a picky reader and finding your story was like a light in the dark lol. Can't say it enough. But if you'd like it, I'd like to give u my discord and help you with some of the characters and how to write, etc... If it's okay with you °^° just cuz I feel like you really have something going on with how you write and I want you to get even better (it's been years since I've been writing fanfiction, deleted all my creepypastas ones, however... But I'm planning on making some fanfics about them). So yeah, hope u accept lol
            
            Also, good luck if you have exams or anything ^^
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