NaturallyDarkBeauty

@Bts_army_4lyf Your welcome and I'm definitely enjoying this book and looking forward to the chapters you will be posting  In addition, I will give some suggestions and advice to you as well that might be useful as you are becoming a writer. Try going back to some of the chapters to catch word spacing issues, so the reader can read the story more clearly. Also, I know as you keep writing that you are going to improving your craft and becoming  even more creative. On that note, try making/developing backstories for not only your main characters, but for some of your side characters as well. To help with that, try writing the characters backstories after you write/come up with the story's plot and summary. It might help with giving you some guidance on that aspect, and it might help you with making the story longer and effective on the readers reaction or emotions. I hope that this advice helps you out, keep on writing Queen, and keep up the great work!!

JJNiles

Thank you for adding The Infamous Reese Choi to your reading list. I hope that you enjoy reading my book.

NaturallyDarkBeauty

@JJNiles Thank you for leaving a message I'm just now seeing this, since I don't expect messages on my page Lol. It's been a while since I have read your book and I had to back track a bit to remind myself what happened since I read so many stories on here Lol Whenever you can please update because this is a great book that you have written When I read this book, my imagination comes to life and it takes me to the actual settings in the book. Keep on writing Queen, because you have a gift God bless
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Roseanneluther

ive got a really good AMBW book: 'Bloods Feud' can you please check it out? That would be amazing for me as a apiring writer ♡

NaturallyDarkBeauty

@namj00hney Awesome and you're welcome  I will definitely make sure to read those few chapters on Wattpad and give some feedback to help you as a aspiring writer
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Roseanneluther

@NaturallyDarkBeauty  It's been a while but my book will be available this coming May as a full published book! But you can still read the 1st few chapters on Wattpad. 
            Thanks for thr follow I  appreciate it.
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NaturallyDarkBeauty

@namj00hney I'm just now seeing this message Lol Hopefully your book is still posted online for me to find I will try to check it out as soon as I can love God bless
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