Lori James

@StarGirl234 I am really really sorry if that upset you

@StarGirl234 I really love the story but I don't understand why you feel the need to explain the dialogue constantly. I get what is being said, I don't need them to speak and then for you to explain the point of what they spoke. Your story is awesome. I love it. But good dialogue explains itself. It's becoming redundant and it's killing me because I really want to know where the story goes yet I keep feeling insulted by you're constant need to explain everything they say. Your concept is beautiful but your writing is redundant and unnecessarily wordy. I would be glad to help you with editing if you like. And please understand, your creativity is exciting but I feel you're either insulting your readers intelligence or you have no faith in your dialogue. I don't mean to upset you or be rude or anything of that sort. You have a wonderful idea but I'm having to force myself through it because I'm that in love with the story but extremely bothered the redundancies. You could be amazing

Thanks for the follow.

Thanks for adding The Dream Weaver to your library! Hope you enjoy the story and all the multimedia in it.
          
          Cheers and happy reading,
          
          Amber 

Hello there. Just wanted to drop by and say thank you for reading TOPK! Hope you liked it :)

Thanks so much for voting on Talon the Black!! I super appreciate it and hope you're enjoying the story so far!!

Thank you for the follow and for the votes. Hope you enjoy the rest of my DW fanfic :) It's made my day