luna_looser

The plot of your story is good...I like the story line but you have to work alot on your writing style an d English as well...most of taekook ff readers and writers don't have English as their first language or mother tongue...so  do proof reading before updating the new chapter...don't rush in your story...take your time while writing a scene...don't get offend by my words .. take it these words  positively. and update next chapter Soon

NavyaReddy240

@gul_tk00 yes.... I know that.... Its too difficult to write a story in other language not your own..... I just want my story reach few people. .....
            My english is not that good.... But I know I just managing....... I will try my best to make next chapters good. Tq for advice
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