NayDay49

@JayVictor  i haven't started reading the story but as soon as i do, am surely gonna give my inputs. I already think its gonna be thrilling from what i read in the summary. Very interesting.

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

ScarlettBlackDaisy

@NayDay49  
            
            Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) it's a first draft so there will definitely be errors. 
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NayDay49

@ScarlettBlackDaisy Hi. I am absolutely loving your book. It's very well written and well paced, the characters are not impractical, which is quite honestly rare in WP. The reason l chose this book is because it talks about mental health issues and l think it is portrayed quite well, as far as l can tell. Although people are talking about it, l think most of us don't understand what it looks or feels like to go through any mental illness. I also appreciate the fact that the characters are diverse and real. 
            There are some small grammar issues and missing words, stuff you may have overlooked. But it doesn't take away from the meaning. So glad l found this book.
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EMCastellan

Many thanks for your votes on THE FORBIDDEN ROOM! I hope you enjoyed it :)

EMCastellan

@NayanikaDey I'm delighted to hear that, thank you! Please feel free to check out my other story THE BRIGHT AND THE LOST if you want as well :)
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NayDay49

@EMCastellan I did! It was very well written. Read it all in one go. Very gripping, not one dull moment. The perfect pace for a thriller/horror story. 
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JayVictor

Hello @NayanikaDey - have just seen that you've added SLAVEDAYS to your reading list - brilliant! Thank you so much. I have a new chapter going up today (one every Friday), which brings it to 7 parts, a good amount to really get stuck into! 
          
          I'd love to know what you think :-)
          - J.