NayellyGonzalez0

Ok i know technically no one will ever read this or care. And it is kinda negative but its the truth. But the way some jayfer shippers write jayfer and their characters and their stories are kinda making me sick. I dont like the way sooo many just make jay suffer unjustly, and she forgives keifer super easily or feels bad because he has a sad backstory. Like. As female writers, why would you put your female character through crap like that? I love angst as much as the next person, but it should be fair. 
          	 
          	Either keifer abuses jay, and then she magically forgives him. Or there's a couple where he cheats on her, and it's ok like seriously? Look if keifer was to become physical and violent with her then at least make him change for her and take therapy. But give him slow growth. Also. Why does jay always have to fall for keifer first while he's with someone else? Why can't keifer be the one falling for jay first while she's in a happy relationship with another guy? Why make jay suffer like that and be unjust? If you're gonna write angst, then at least be fair. Because some of these jayfer stories are legit toxic, and yes, that's your choice, but come on. Treat these lovely characters better and give them growth, not toxicity. Keifer would never cheat on jay. And if he ever did, why would she forgive him? She wouldn't. Just like many of you guys would hate jay if she ever cheated on keifer and wanted him to move on.
          	
          	 But it's different for jay, right? The double standards are atrocious. Reminds me of the stranger things fandom . Im not trying to be rude, but I love jayfer, and jay is my favorite . I just want fairness for jayjay because it's always her suffering, and it's weird because most of you guys are girls. Anyway this was just my truth. I don't expect most of you to agree but whatever 

NayellyGonzalez0

@Stowe_ oh wow. I agree with everything you just said. You made alot of excellent points ❤️❤️❤️
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Stowe_

@Stowe_ However, if you look at the raw human psychology behind her actions.
          	  
          	  Jay-Jay could forgive David outwardly because David did not own her heart. 
          	  
          	  He was an outsider to her deeper emotions. Forgiving David cost her absolutely nothing.
          	  
          	  Although he loved her without anything back. Some people hated him totally even don't want him near Keifer and jay for kissed her when he was drunk and said Keifer wouldn't be do this. 
          	  
          	   ((( For me he would just just like ace.
          	  
          	  Every single person has saint ;
          	  
          	  Just because I love the character doesn't mean he can't do any mistakes 
          	  
          	  From the perspective of him, if he was same stage like David. He would.
          	  
          	   I'm a reader of Lara since 2019 and I'm a jayfer shipper and yet I will say it should be always David who would take care of her goodly without anything back after jayfer. )
          	  
          	   when you love someone to that extreme, you hand them the ultimate power to destroy you. Because she had already been shattered
          	  
          	  But when you love someone to that extreme, you hand them the ultimate power to destroy you. Because she had already been shattered once by the "Revenge Plan" bet, her mind was paralyzed by terror. 
          	  
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ashdresloverx

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NayellyGonzalez0

@ashdresloverx hi my friend. I tried posting a message but it wouldnt budge. Ill try again though 
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ashdresloverx

@ashdresloverx hiiiii my friend pookie  I have a issue with the conversation post okkk can u tell me how to fix it I already updated it and had a complain on Wattpad com 
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NayellyGonzalez0

Ok i know technically no one will ever read this or care. And it is kinda negative but its the truth. But the way some jayfer shippers write jayfer and their characters and their stories are kinda making me sick. I dont like the way sooo many just make jay suffer unjustly, and she forgives keifer super easily or feels bad because he has a sad backstory. Like. As female writers, why would you put your female character through crap like that? I love angst as much as the next person, but it should be fair. 
           
          Either keifer abuses jay, and then she magically forgives him. Or there's a couple where he cheats on her, and it's ok like seriously? Look if keifer was to become physical and violent with her then at least make him change for her and take therapy. But give him slow growth. Also. Why does jay always have to fall for keifer first while he's with someone else? Why can't keifer be the one falling for jay first while she's in a happy relationship with another guy? Why make jay suffer like that and be unjust? If you're gonna write angst, then at least be fair. Because some of these jayfer stories are legit toxic, and yes, that's your choice, but come on. Treat these lovely characters better and give them growth, not toxicity. Keifer would never cheat on jay. And if he ever did, why would she forgive him? She wouldn't. Just like many of you guys would hate jay if she ever cheated on keifer and wanted him to move on.
          
           But it's different for jay, right? The double standards are atrocious. Reminds me of the stranger things fandom . Im not trying to be rude, but I love jayfer, and jay is my favorite . I just want fairness for jayjay because it's always her suffering, and it's weird because most of you guys are girls. Anyway this was just my truth. I don't expect most of you to agree but whatever 

NayellyGonzalez0

@Stowe_ oh wow. I agree with everything you just said. You made alot of excellent points ❤️❤️❤️
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Stowe_

@Stowe_ However, if you look at the raw human psychology behind her actions.
            
            Jay-Jay could forgive David outwardly because David did not own her heart. 
            
            He was an outsider to her deeper emotions. Forgiving David cost her absolutely nothing.
            
            Although he loved her without anything back. Some people hated him totally even don't want him near Keifer and jay for kissed her when he was drunk and said Keifer wouldn't be do this. 
            
             ((( For me he would just just like ace.
            
            Every single person has saint ;
            
            Just because I love the character doesn't mean he can't do any mistakes 
            
            From the perspective of him, if he was same stage like David. He would.
            
             I'm a reader of Lara since 2019 and I'm a jayfer shipper and yet I will say it should be always David who would take care of her goodly without anything back after jayfer. )
            
             when you love someone to that extreme, you hand them the ultimate power to destroy you. Because she had already been shattered
            
            But when you love someone to that extreme, you hand them the ultimate power to destroy you. Because she had already been shattered once by the "Revenge Plan" bet, her mind was paralyzed by terror. 
            
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idcard12

Hiii!!! ✨
          Gurl, I have seen you reading my books but now you're not commenting? 

NayellyGonzalez0

@idcard12 hi my friend. Sorry but ive gotten a little behind on your other book. But I had to stop reading the other one because im sorry but I just didn't agree with it. I just didn't like how keifers actions were being excused and how other readers were happy jay was going to forgive him for all the disgusting crap he put her through. I just couldn't handle seeing that because jayjay deserves better. And I don't like second chance romances where the dumb guy finally realizes how important the girl is. I just don't like that and especially as a girl I can't respect it. I didn't like that jay was going to fall in love with a terrible person who mistreated her like that and nothing can convince me an intelligent woman like her self would fall for an abusive person like him. Like I said before. If it wasn't keifer everyone would be hating on the guy but since it is keifer everyone roots for him and minimizes jays pain. They only feel bad for jay because of her past but as soon as keifer shows up and treats her wrong  everyone wants her to forgive him. So sorry my friend but I can't handle that. I trusted your writing but I just couldn't handle what proceeded in that story so I had to quit. I still think jay deserved better in that book than keifer. Plus. I was having some issues with replying to comments from writers and have been trying to fix it but now it works. 
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Herworld_0115

Hey dear, are you okay? You aren't commenting on my books anymore? 

Herworld_0115

@NayellyGonzalez0 it's okay, dear. You don't have to feel bad. I love your comments ♥️✨
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NayellyGonzalez0

@Herworld_0115 hi my friend how are you? I am good. Thank you for checking up on me. And I'm sorry about not commenting. I have been reading them though ans they are awesome. I am still trying to fix that commenting issue that I spoke to you about. If I comment you will reply to me but I won't be able to reply to you and then I'll feel bad. 
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