I found your fanfic "The Light of Hope" interesting. The only thing that bothers me is a bit of the story's plot, specifically why the girl feels the way she does. I hope that in future updates you can explain more about her past.
@mariliahelena2000 Hi, thank you so much for reading my story ❤️
I am going to explain her past, just not sure in this book?
It's a bit long, so I thought I was going to make a another book