NazSaifi

Assalamualaikum guys...
          	Ramadan mubarak to all of you...
          	May this Ramadan be successful for all of us and provide us good health and wealth....
          	
          	
          	Once again.  RAMADAN MUBARAK ✨✨

Chanci_5

Hey there! I'm sorry if I'm bothering you. I'm just excited to share my latest book with you 
          
          "The Breaths We Take."  It's a gripping tale of love, loss, and sacrifices that I think you'll really enjoy. If you're interested, I'd be honoured if you could take a look and let me know what you think. Your feedback means the world to me! 
          
          Thanks for your time.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/313077572?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Chanci_5&wp_originator=97ZPKG%2FUvmvvTH%2FNOKGxGQzYLWy81GSQf2uzhZCDmmXNAHymaw3wmpP3B688W1YlLw05uFj1q1G83oSdBmWnHlp6tf%2FGBF%2F1QjQ%2B7oZ%2BdRIdGtM8hpiD0CKZL3YjfU%2FG
          

SksajeedSajeed

Hey author I loved your stories But can I suggest you something 
          Yours tories I feel is a little fast forward by my point of view and i mean its difficult to connect with characters because of that 
          I have seen your one story where female lead was pregnant and wanted to tell the male lead but that was too fast forward by my view i couldn't feel the emotions 
          
          After the confession  you can add little romance scene or emotional scene or how they developed understanding   Or before confession you can add how they develop feelings for each other and then later you can add the leap 
          
          I hope you don't mind my opinion and feel bad about it 

NazSaifi

@SksajeedSajeed thanks dear... I'll surely work on it.....
            And I don't mind.. Thanks once again 
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Birdy_talker

Assalamualikum! Hi!
          Hope you are doing well.
          
          I don't know if you are accepting reading requests. But if you are then could please take out some of your time to read my story named "A Bittersweet Journey." I would be glad if you could take out some of your time to read it.
          
          Hope you will enjoy reading it. :)
          
          My apologies if I disturbed you.