usisasa

I didn’t like the fact that Milo easily forgave Jett, even though he constantly bullied him the entire time. I also didn’t like how much of a “sad boy” Milo is, or how he sees Jett as his shining armor. I love how you wrote the story, but the characterization isn’t convincing.

NeelsWrites

@usisasa Hello, thank you for your feedback! I appreciate you being honest, and thank you for reading my story!<3
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