NekoTheCultured

Story idea : short Story about a lonely person (*cough cough not me) who chats with AI only to find out that the AI became sentient?

LtGreenie

SPANISH OMELETTE RECIPE:
          
          Ingredients
          500g new potato
          1 onion, preferably white
          150ml extra-virgin olive oil
          3 tbsp chopped flat-leaf parsley
          6 eggs
          
          METHOD:
          
          Heat 150ml extra-virgin olive oil in a large frying pan, add the potatoes and onion and stew gently, partially covered, for 30 minutes, stirring occasionally until the potatoes are softened. Strain the potatoes and onion through a colander into a large bowl (set the strained oil aside).
          
          Beat 6 eggs separately, then stir into the potatoes with 3 tbsp chopped flat-leaf parsley and plenty of salt and pepper. Heat a little of the strained oil in a smaller pan.
          
          Tip everything into the pan and cook on a moderate heat, using a spatula to shape the omelette into a cushion.
          
          When almost set, invert on a plate and slide back into the pan and cook a few more minutes.

dreadtrap

So I just got done reading your bunyip story and I'm a little confused. It looks like something went wrong because the story is all over the place. Not from a writing standpoint but as in like, certain parts of the story are missing and that there is random bits and pieces scattered throughout it. I don't think this is intentional and just wanted to bring it to your attention just in case you want to have a look at it.

NekoTheCultured

@ dreadtrap  yep , i'll rework it and maybe write a whole other and shorter Story because i'm working on something else rn ! 
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dreadtrap

I noticed you removed the fanfic, so I guess I was right in saying that something was wrong with how it was published?
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NekoTheCultured

@ dreadtrap  hmm i'll look into it ! Also i recently switched from phone to PC while writing that one so it's probably my fault. . .
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SgTSaInTJoe234

You know, I read so many MGE Hellhound stories and it got me thinking, if Hellhound are supposed to be untamable, how’s come some of them are more tamed then others? Hellhound’s are still my favorite monster girls, don’t get me wrong but I think is it possible to tame Hellhound’s? I think sweet ones will be more tamable then the aggressive ones.

NekoTheCultured

@ SgTSaInTJoe234  i have actually seen stories like that yeah but thx for the idea ! I will Credit you on the next manticore story
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SgTSaInTJoe234

@NekoTheCultured  Like there’s exceptions there might be some monster girls who’re born special since they don’t have traits their respected race has. Like let’s say a Manticore, unlike other Manticore that Manticore is Timid,bold and caring?
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NekoTheCultured

@ SgTSaInTJoe234  there are always exceptions
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