NekoTheCultured

Story idea : short Story about a lonely person (*cough cough not me) who chats with AI only to find out that the AI became sentient?

dreadtrap

So I just got done reading your bunyip story and I'm a little confused. It looks like something went wrong because the story is all over the place. Not from a writing standpoint but as in like, certain parts of the story are missing and that there is random bits and pieces scattered throughout it. I don't think this is intentional and just wanted to bring it to your attention just in case you want to have a look at it.

NekoTheCultured

@ dreadtrap  yep , i'll rework it and maybe write a whole other and shorter Story because i'm working on something else rn ! 
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dreadtrap

I noticed you removed the fanfic, so I guess I was right in saying that something was wrong with how it was published?
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NekoTheCultured

@ dreadtrap  hmm i'll look into it ! Also i recently switched from phone to PC while writing that one so it's probably my fault. . .
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SgTSaInTJoe234

You know, I read so many MGE Hellhound stories and it got me thinking, if Hellhound are supposed to be untamable, how’s come some of them are more tamed then others? Hellhound’s are still my favorite monster girls, don’t get me wrong but I think is it possible to tame Hellhound’s? I think sweet ones will be more tamable then the aggressive ones.

NekoTheCultured

@ SgTSaInTJoe234  i have actually seen stories like that yeah but thx for the idea ! I will Credit you on the next manticore story
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SgTSaInTJoe234

@NekoTheCultured  Like there’s exceptions there might be some monster girls who’re born special since they don’t have traits their respected race has. Like let’s say a Manticore, unlike other Manticore that Manticore is Timid,bold and caring?
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NekoTheCultured

@ SgTSaInTJoe234  there are always exceptions
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SgTSaInTJoe234

More sad things about me is one, I grew up without a dad. Two,I didn’t get a Girlfriend in High School and still single in my mid-twenties.

NekoTheCultured

If you wan't some more life advices just ask me , my uncle used to tell me these all the time .
            
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NekoTheCultured

Uncle , Aunt and grandma died this year , grew up for 5 years without a father , lost many friends and lastly , war has probably (haven't heard from him 3 weeks after the war started )killed one of my closest online friend .
            Yet here i am , still looking forward without faltering, my friend would probably laugh and tell me that i should live my life to it's fullest potential,  same goes for you homie.
            Jeez now i Sound like a boomer lmfao
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