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Essie-S-Nix
Hey I like your story 'forgotten betrayal' I just have one problem. They writing. To be more persisted how's your books being writing. I just notice that I was getting confused slog of who was say what and other stuff, while reading. I love to keep reading you book, but I'll mostly likely stop because of the way it's written. Doesn't get my wrong the theme and outline is good, it's just the other stuff.