NelehGrimm

Hello! I like your airborne story. Sorry if I'm spamming you, lol. I just think it has great descriptions! XD anyways, I'm making a new story called "reflection"! It'd be great if you could judge my style, and help me improve. I just posted the prologue, so hopefully That's a decent example of my
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Can you please read one of my stories and give feedback? It's called The Turning.  Much appreciated!

hey du lad doch mal die geschichte hoch und frag die leute nach kontruktiver kritik