Hey guy so a little about me I'm actually 23 and I enjoyed reading your stories so much I decided to try it out  for myself. I used to invent bed time stories for my siblings and decided to give writing one a try. Its a lot harder then it seems. Ill be glad to receive any pointers. 

My first story is dedicated to my brother who is in a military academy and we rarely get to see so I send him letters and funny stories. He recently wrote that he missed my stories so this story is dedicated to him. Every time I publish a chapter I print it and send it to him. But I am appreciate at any of you who take the time to read it. I really appreciate it! XD