@blackeevee17 oh! Speaking of fixing it when i finished chapter 6 i decided to treat this as my elementary essay in that mean time i decided to start over and rewrote everything because aside of what you said like spelling and grammar there's a lot of things that i have to add up especially with chapter 5 it feels like rushed to me, but my mind was fighting over that decision "should i do it now or when i finished chapter 6"but all aside thank you for the advice I'll be improve the story once chapter 6 was out or at least now...
