NemesisHunterstar

Chapter 1 A Tight Squeeze was Complete on the Rewritten version of poppy playtime angel of salvation.
          	
          	Go check it out:
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/413905083-poppy-playtime-angel-of-salvation

NemesisHunterstar

@NemesisHunterstar  stay toons because Chapter 2 was in the works
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blackeevee17

@NemesisHunterstar Want my advice? While you wait for Chapter 6 of Poppy Playtime to be released look back on your previous chapters and do a little spelling and grammar check.

blackeevee17

@NemesisHunterstar You’re welcome. It’s just that, with some of the stuff you wrote, it was kinda confusing, if you know what I mean.
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NemesisHunterstar

@blackeevee17 oh! Speaking of fixing it when i finished chapter 6 i decided to treat this as my elementary essay in that mean time i decided to start over and rewrote everything because aside of what you said like spelling and grammar there's a lot of things that i have to add up especially with chapter 5 it feels like rushed to me, but my mind was fighting over that decision "should i do it now or when i finished chapter 6"but all aside thank you for the advice I'll be improve the story once chapter 6 was out or at least now...
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