Hey, Marie here. I can't help but notice that there are a lot of mistakes in your writing! (: I was wondering if you are looking for an editor. You could give me your password and I could go in and fix any errors in your story. I wouldn't change the story line or anything, and if you didn't like how I was doing it you could just change your password. Sorry if this sounds weird, just trying to help out! (: I'd understand if you said no, giving access of your account to a stranger is risky, but I wouldn't harm your account!