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Chapter 63 is up! I hope you like it! But, I'm sure you are here to read about the alterations I made to the earlier chapters, so let me get right to those for you.
Chapter 8- I created a painful mental blocker as the reasoning as to why he wasn't able to immediately recall Rwby and its relation to the world that he found himself in. In my head it makes sense because he's a Deus~Humanus so although he knows about the other worlds he's not supposed to be able to interact with them. Because It's a quick alteration it isn't fleshed out yet but maybe it will be eventually.
Chapter 10- Same thing
Chapter 11- Main character man doesn't get assaulted by Nix and instead fends her off with Shiva in mind. Basically, MC man is a lot less of a sack of shit since he doesn't just immediately get involved in a relationship with Nix and Neyah without thinking about Shiva. So, he has a bit more of an internal conflict about the entire situation and doesn't fully commit to the role of lover until a bit later.
Chapter 12- No blowjob lemon, just a quick make out.
Chapter 17- This is when the full claiming actually takes place and (Y/N) accepts his relationship with both Nix and Neyah at the detriment of Shiva. Read the full dialogue to get a feel for how he's taking the event.
These were the quick changes I made and it probably won't be the last time I do this. I still need to relocate the blowjob Lemon since ain't no way Imma just delete it, tf. Also, this doesn't really solve the romance issue, but it makes it just a little bit better which is good.
Got any questions or comments, maybe a bit of feedback, feel free to hit a brotha up. I'm always available! I hope you enjoy the coming chapters!