Sh3llShock3r

Hello it been a while I lost the other account but I just started a story on this one do give it a chance if you want

Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Thanks I started reading more stories that were in my type of style and tried to see if I could improve it
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NeonAkabane

@HdbdObama69 it's pretty good! You're definitely improving since the chapters are wayyy longer! Plus you use a great writing style. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Sorry to budge. It have you given it a chance? I pulled a stretch and managed to make 3 chapters in one day yesterday with another one being uploaded today
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fangyboi007

I believe in you. You're an amazing author.
          I love your king story btw

fangyboi007

@fangyboi007 why thank you hun, you're doing a phenomenal job :) I truly wish you the best and I absolutely believe in you. You're truly a wonderful author and beautiful soul
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NeonAkabane

@fangyboi007 got motivated to upload a chapter for you :D
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NeonAkabane

@fangyboi007 omg thank you  I was buried with work that I couldn't even check this app for a while. You're a previous sweetheart ☺❤
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Sh3llShock3r

You alive

NeonAkabane

@HdbdObama69 true, gotta sleep now though, got alot of work to do. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Same but we gotta hold on
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F00LSBLADE

FINALLY released another chapter after so long I'm sorry

NeonAkabane

@F00LSBLADE it was pretty good. Though a bit short, you improved your writing I must say! I reccomend using fonts though! Makes it prettier and easier to depict action and dialogue. And add a space after colon. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane If you don’t mind I would like for you to read it and tell me what you think about it
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Sh3llShock3r

Thank you for continuing the story

Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane thank you I do know Inneed to work on my punctuation and I very much appreciate it
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KingGamerzilla

Take as much time as you and even though you haven't updated your king story it's still really entertaining to read but either take as much as you need and don't stress yourself out.

NeonAkabane

@HdbdObama69 I'm really trying not to give up! I've been thinking for awhile if I should update or not, I'm not sure how to keep the story going tbh.
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane I just finished reading it this has a lot of potential I myself am also writing a story so writer to writer I hope you don’t give up I understand that you may have some personal issues right now and I respect if you need a break. Remember many people enjoy reading stories and yours to and I would hate to see another reader give up
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