Sh3llShock3r

Hello it been a while I lost the other account but I just started a story on this one do give it a chance if you want

Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Thanks I started reading more stories that were in my type of style and tried to see if I could improve it
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NeonAkabane

@HdbdObama69 it's pretty good! You're definitely improving since the chapters are wayyy longer! Plus you use a great writing style. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Sorry to budge. It have you given it a chance? I pulled a stretch and managed to make 3 chapters in one day yesterday with another one being uploaded today
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fangyboi007

I believe in you. You're an amazing author.
          I love your king story btw

fangyboi007

@fangyboi007 why thank you hun, you're doing a phenomenal job :) I truly wish you the best and I absolutely believe in you. You're truly a wonderful author and beautiful soul
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NeonAkabane

@fangyboi007 got motivated to upload a chapter for you :D
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NeonAkabane

@fangyboi007 omg thank you  I was buried with work that I couldn't even check this app for a while. You're a previous sweetheart ☺❤
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Sh3llShock3r

You alive

NeonAkabane

@HdbdObama69 true, gotta sleep now though, got alot of work to do. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane Same but we gotta hold on
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F00LSBLADE

FINALLY released another chapter after so long I'm sorry

NeonAkabane

@F00LSBLADE it was pretty good. Though a bit short, you improved your writing I must say! I reccomend using fonts though! Makes it prettier and easier to depict action and dialogue. And add a space after colon. 
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Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane If you don’t mind I would like for you to read it and tell me what you think about it
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Sh3llShock3r

Thank you for continuing the story

Sh3llShock3r

@NeonAkabane thank you I do know Inneed to work on my punctuation and I very much appreciate it
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