Hey Neptune, everything on your writing is looking STUNNING. I by far love, city lights, it’s very interesting.
You need to recheck over your chapters again for spelling , capital letters and the small things like periods, parentheses and quotations!!
The other small thing is trying to make your paragraphs and sentences make sense (which is only a few) and try to keep up with what to to after the “ — “ happens!
But besides all of that everything is amazing and very well written, you’re doing great Neptune.
Your loved!!<3- Minze:)