Hi, How are you? I hope things are fine.
This is a request for your quick review on my short story "To Be With You" from the book "Sugar Bites!".
I've been trying to make some time to reread & edit it because I think it comes across a bit cringe. Needed you to drop your suggestions about the same! Also, let me know if it doesn't go with the overall aesthetic of the rest of the book (i.e the other short stories).
Also, I'd like to ask if you would like to read some stories other than AvNeil fan fiction? Of course, the essence would be the same as my other stories but just the characters would be different.
Thankyou!