
Nerdy__Turtle
Hi, How are you? I hope things are fine. This is a request for your quick review on my short story "To Be With You" from the book "Sugar Bites!". I've been trying to make some time to reread & edit it because I think it comes across a bit cringe. Needed you to drop your suggestions about the same! Also, let me know if it doesn't go with the overall aesthetic of the rest of the book (i.e the other short stories). Also, I'd like to ask if you would like to read some stories other than AvNeil fan fiction? Of course, the essence would be the same as my other stories but just the characters would be different. Thankyou!

Nerdy__Turtle
@saisudhasagar I will try to work on the plot that you mentioned. Thankyou for suggesting.
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Nerdy__Turtle
@saisudhasagar Thankyou for the appreciation, really means a lot. About another story, I've a few things in mind & I do have a plot which has a few similar tropes as "TPWF" (reverse grumpy x sunshine). I'll try to update soon. Hope you'll like it ;)
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saisudhasagar
If possible please write a story on avneil where neil is a police officer and very passionate about his work and both avneil parents are family friends lives in same village, arrange marriage for avneil, they also accept for married secretly so that avni don't gets any threats due to neil police job Please write story on this basis how avneil survive their love and duty being their marriage as secret
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