NerezzaRPG

I dunno if I should continue "The Demon's Tears" Should I?

Wrathful_Atlas

@NerezzaRPG I read the first chapter and partly the second and thought it was nice,but look at how in real books that space the words from the other sentences. This is cause they are basically changing the subject. Also it seems good of a story. Only thing I could say was the POV threw me off alittle but it was fine.
          	  Good Book ;D
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NerezzaRPG

Alright
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Wrathful_Atlas

@NerezzaRPG  Well..XD its apparently its the same thing as a group of people working together. We basically message advise and advertise our stuff together. Its basically a you help me and I help you in our books,poems, or whatever you make.
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kazumawrites

(✿◠‿◠) @NerezzaRPG Thanks for adding my story! I hope you enjoy reading it.

NerezzaRPG

@jojobizarre Well double xD
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NerezzaRPG

@jojobizarre Oh wait I already said that
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NerezzaRPG

@jojobizarre Keep up the great work~ <3
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NerezzaRPG

I dunno if I should continue "The Demon's Tears" Should I?

Wrathful_Atlas

@NerezzaRPG I read the first chapter and partly the second and thought it was nice,but look at how in real books that space the words from the other sentences. This is cause they are basically changing the subject. Also it seems good of a story. Only thing I could say was the POV threw me off alittle but it was fine.
            Good Book ;D
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NerezzaRPG

Alright
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Wrathful_Atlas

@NerezzaRPG  Well..XD its apparently its the same thing as a group of people working together. We basically message advise and advertise our stuff together. Its basically a you help me and I help you in our books,poems, or whatever you make.
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