@NeverBeSilence
Hi, I have to say that your story "Trapped within Mass Effect" 1 and 2 are great 100/100
Thank you so much! I really appreciate hearing people like my work. Feels good and gives me the confidence to keep updating
I just wanted to ask everyone a quick question. My situation is starting to getting somewhat stable, as stable can be, so I wanted to ask: Would you want me to fix a few things from my first “Trapped in mass effect” or do you like the way it is? I’d fix just a few things and typos. Things like the Ashley romance, unnecessary cringe and consistency. If not, the second book will have my attention and the first book will stay as it is.
Thank you for your answers
@Looperst97 you weren’t wrong about Kaiden being alive. Oc saved Ash while Shepard saved Kaiden.
@NeverBeSilence I agree with him about the breeding part. In my opinion nothing really needs to be changed besides that in part 1. I’ve waited hoping you’re doing better with your situation and hearing that you’re somewhat stable again has brought some joy to my heart. I’ve looked for a few good male oc harem fics around and I’ll be honest, yours is the best one I found. I can’t wait for the next chapter of part 2 so that we can see the love blossom with old loves and new ones as well as Cerberus get their asses handed to them on a platinum platter. Hope you go from stable to better with your life man.
@NeverBeSilence Well, it might be interesting if you gave Ashley a breeding kink. You could use her getting pregnant with the MCs kid when he visits her during ME2 and eventually have her give birth during ME3 to mix things up so you don't have to write the VS scenes in 3 to accommodate both her and Kaiden. Unless I'm misremembering and he was sacrificed. If you feel like rewriting parts of her romance in 1, go ahead, you do good work.
Need more parts to me2 and love your work keep it up
Hope everything is going well man. Love the stories and I can’t wait for when you continue updating them.
Trapped within mass effect 2 still updated
To anyone curious about how things are going, not too well. I was originally going to get back into writing yesterday, but we’ve got some news that are making things tense. My landlord sold the house from under us and we’re given until the end of April to find a place. We’re fighting since there’s literally no homes available in my area. The only way we get assisted living is by being homeless for 5 years ( I wish I was kidding ). So longer delay for writing until things get more stable. I’ll update with any new developments
To anyone curious to what happened and why the stories are delayed, my health is in decline. I don’t know what’s wrong or what’s happening, but I know it’s not good. Around Christmas, I had gotten a cold so I could get to writing and now… I feel like something is messed up. My condition Is also acting odd and it’s messing up with my insides. Until I recover and feel better, I’ll be on hiatus. I’m sorry if I disappointed you, but understand that’s it’s not by choice. When I find out what’s wrong, I’ll update again
@NeverBeSilence Understandable personal health comes first but I'm very much sorry to hear that I truly hope that you'll eventually get better
Update on my last status: I won’t be able to write anything for a while. Something went wrong with my left arm and half my back. I’m barely able to open and close my hand, let alone hold my phone or start typing a few thousand words. Give me a little while to recover and I’ll get back to work
A little notice but the update for both book will be delayed for a few days. I was planning on hammering everything and get it done today, but I can’t. So hopefully in 3-5 days I’ll be updating those stories. Hopefully you understand
What’s your username on discord?
