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The prologue of Makai Senki will be split into parts. Chapter 2 is finished, but I won’t publish it until I have a few more chapters ready. I’m currently working on chapter 3. I’ll revise chapter 1 to make it my strongest, as it’s essentially the second half of the story. I’ll post the first two chapters and update them on my other platform as well, so you don’t need to reread chapter 1—it’s basically just the second half of the prologue—but for new readers, yes.

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Update! Danmachi and my new Garo will take some time to write. Right now, I’m not satisfied with the prologue. I’m sorry I gave you something I feel is trash, and I’m honestly disgusted with myself. Chapter 1, which I’m already working on, will be the true start. However, in the future, the prologue will be heavily revised. The same goes for the bio, though I’ll still keep the story up. Once again, sorry for this slump — I’m ashamed of myself.

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Do you guys dislike the prologue of Makai Senki? Share your honest thoughts.

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@neobro94e The story’s core is good, but it could have been better—the execution was poor. Really? I actually thought it was bad. Honestly, I should have taken my time with this; it was rushed and not well thought out. I was so focused on the VNS that I didn’t focus on the rest.
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