NeverOneReachAway

And I also read my first chapters again and oh boyy, I don't like the first one...  :/

NeverOneReachAway

Chapter 1-8 are kinda confusing  on how all the relationships between the characters are but maybe chapter 9 (Angela) helped understand their structure a bit and overviews the main characters
          	  spoiler: two main characters didn't appear yet (status: chapter 11) and I don't have a lot of side characters, you know one of them already (the girl) 
          	  ;-)
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NeverOneReachAway

And I also read my first chapters again and oh boyy, I don't like the first one...  :/

NeverOneReachAway

Chapter 1-8 are kinda confusing  on how all the relationships between the characters are but maybe chapter 9 (Angela) helped understand their structure a bit and overviews the main characters
            spoiler: two main characters didn't appear yet (status: chapter 11) and I don't have a lot of side characters, you know one of them already (the girl) 
            ;-)
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