Hey! Just wanna say thank you so very much for your comments, they were so sweet and meant a lot!! I read almost all of your stuff, and it's pretty good. It's obvious what celebrities you like! ;) I'm a grammar freak...so I'm going to give you a few tips, take 'em or leave 'em! :)
-don't switch around between present and past tense. Like 'I walk to the stairs' vs. 'I walked to the stairs". Most writing uses past tense. And once you pick one, EVERYTHING should stick to that tense! It's a little tricky to get the hang of but you can do it!
-whenever someone speaks, it's a new line, and be sure you put quotation marks around it, and clarify who's speaking.
-Also, you might want to develop your characters a bit more... it sounds like you're using the same characters in all your stories. That's okay, just be aware that can get a little confusing if people read more than one of your stories!
-And I totally respect your love of music, but just be aware that many people reading your stories may not know what music you're talking about. Most novels don't use real celebrity or band names, because those also change with the times, if that makes sense!
-Keep it up though, just work on your writing and it can be great!
And please keep reading my stuff, commenting, and voting. It means so much! Thanks :)