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          	Before the trials and the Marked. Agrecians needed a foundation. They became the “saviors” of the world. The heralds of the respect, of honesty, of chivalry, of everything our human flaws yearned to see in our empty hearts. Then, being a murderer could get you Marked. And we agreed. Then, stealing could get you Marked. Again we cheered. Finally a government, finally a leader who helped us and understood us. Justice was right again. 
          	
          	Then speaking out got you Marked. And people argued against others on the fairness of that rule. They protect us. Was a common throwaway line. How dare you argue? Do you know better? 
          	
          	Then speaking your own mind, your own thoughts, everything that made us human became legal grounds to get us Marked. 
          	
          	See, even writing this could get me Marked. This is the story of the people and if I am killed it won’t stop this story from being told. I have hidden 18 copies of this story, verbatim, around the globe. Hidden in places of comfort, in places of strife, and even within their own facilities. Once I die, I have another who is willing to make more copies, continue the story. 
          	
          	I only have one regret. And it is of a personal nature. 
          	
          	If you read this, dad, I’ll be dead. Don’t cry. I died for what I believed in. My last wish is that you don’t find the angel of death whilst among the sin you continue to commit.

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New story coming out soon! Here's a preview: 
          
          Before the trials and the Marked. Agrecians needed a foundation. They became the “saviors” of the world. The heralds of the respect, of honesty, of chivalry, of everything our human flaws yearned to see in our empty hearts. Then, being a murderer could get you Marked. And we agreed. Then, stealing could get you Marked. Again we cheered. Finally a government, finally a leader who helped us and understood us. Justice was right again. 
          
          Then speaking out got you Marked. And people argued against others on the fairness of that rule. They protect us. Was a common throwaway line. How dare you argue? Do you know better? 
          
          Then speaking your own mind, your own thoughts, everything that made us human became legal grounds to get us Marked. 
          
          See, even writing this could get me Marked. This is the story of the people and if I am killed it won’t stop this story from being told. I have hidden 18 copies of this story, verbatim, around the globe. Hidden in places of comfort, in places of strife, and even within their own facilities. Once I die, I have another who is willing to make more copies, continue the story. 
          
          I only have one regret. And it is of a personal nature. 
          
          If you read this, dad, I’ll be dead. Don’t cry. I died for what I believed in. My last wish is that you don’t find the angel of death whilst among the sin you continue to commit.

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Alright thank you for those who have come this far
          
          I might write a sequel (well I have a bit already done)
          
          BUTTTTTTT
          
          I need some advice
          
          I have a second account 
          
          : 
          
          
          
          In which I wrote another version of this story using slightly different names and storylines, but I like those names and storylines more
          
          IF YOU CAN PLEASE CHECK IT OUT, its under the same name 
          
          TELL ME WHICH I SHOULD CONTINUE ! Majority wins 
          
          Just comment on either story and I'll tally it up! 
          
          
          THANK YOU 
          
          PLUS I HAVE A PREQUEL COMING UP WITH ONE OF THE CHARACTER'S STORY AND KNOWING WHICH ONE YOU GUYS LIKE MORE WILL BE VERY HELPFUL 
          
          THANKS AGAIN

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my second account : @choconajma
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mainlyunbelievable

Hey,
          I was wondering if you could go and check out my book, I hope you'll like it, if you do
          
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          Please and thank you.
          Love your profile by the way.
          
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/JcUA4BauNI

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@mainlyunbelievable lol u spelled guess wrong...:)
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mainlyunbelievable

@mainlyunbelievable well I geuss it experience ( of course suuure~ wink)
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