Nex_TheSwampWitch

Halfway through the first edits.
          	
          	Between adding and editing it has given me much to think about with my story progression and world building.
          	
          	I'm always torn between over and under describing. Once when working with a co-author they gave me grief about three paragraphs describing what was ultimately a tinder box and match holder. I'm trying to find balance here.

Nex_TheSwampWitch

Halfway through the first edits.
          
          Between adding and editing it has given me much to think about with my story progression and world building.
          
          I'm always torn between over and under describing. Once when working with a co-author they gave me grief about three paragraphs describing what was ultimately a tinder box and match holder. I'm trying to find balance here.

Nex_TheSwampWitch

I took a loonngg break to get my head back in the game. I was overwhelmed between work and life and burned out HARD when I sat down to edit this.
          
          The first FOUR chapters of Eyes Like Thunder are rewritten and roughly edited finally!
          
          I've expanded and added some history and detail to some parts.
          
          As always I would love your input!

Nex_TheSwampWitch

Chapter 4 is out - despite working 16 hour days and taking care of the kids!
          I just published "IV" of my story "Eyes Like Thunder". https://www.wattpad.com/1291499958?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Nex_TheSwampWitch&wp_originator=LJwikAYzPmzgVXA5m%2BvcgVNwuPCzxw8%2FAj4NMzVNHRipkbE2ITe730loSNTthxKErCpcr2lXTWvl%2F%2Bm6N%2F5%2BYNmSflJo8SExPtiHfBIKL95t0cAs6Gx4oco6Qp166bJj