@annettex77 Hey, it's a great story. I would love to read more. You have great scenes with plenty of action, drama and funny/cute stuff to keep your readers going. Only thing I would work on is the emotional side of things. When she first finds out they've been cheating she confronts them, runs away and cries. But when Grayson confronts her about what is wrong she just sort of calmly explains what the deal is. Without even mentioning the tattoo, or thinking how on earth she could remove it. Does she even want to remove it? How does she process her emotions I guess is what I'm saying. Does she have feelings for Grayson (i'm pretty sure she does ^_^) Is she worried about moving on too fast or is she still trying to push that into the background and focus on dealing with the cheaters? Good luck and keep writing, its awesome!