Nezothe

TNBS is basically completed, just have to edit.

Creepy-Face

I have more~ I hope you like it! If not you can ignore it, or tell me to stop. My feelings won't get hurt or anything, I just like to share. 
          
          I hope you are having a lovely day, and that this is fun to read! 
          
          Fate of Cliches:
          You know those cliche fantasy stories, all of their lovely tropes?
          Well Sui does, and after reincarnating they except all the tropes to fall on them:
          The Harem and/or Enemies to Lovers and/or Forbidden Romance:
          The OP Powers
          Being A Long Lost Child Of A Great Bloodline
          Chosen One/Hero
          The Mentor
          A System 
          Just to have every trope he hoped for to be none-existant or inverted:
          A Harem/Enemies To Lovers/Forbbiden Romance? Your fiance broke up with you, left you for another guy.. More like lovers to enemies, and sadly due to your damaged heart you kinda didn't sneak out anymore romance.. Let alone with an enemy, or anyone that could fit forbidden romance..
          OP Powers? Actually you have a chronic condition that makes your body like glass, it will break if you push it
          Long Lost Child of Some Great Bloodline? Sorry buddy, it seems like you ain't leaving your unknown middle class status anytime soon. 
          Chosen One? You have neither the powers nor the prophecy to ever dream of being called one
          A Mentor? Sadly, you just get a guy that seems to know less about magic than you do. Seems like you are up for a solo journey..
          A System? Sadly those do not exist in this dimension... They are not allowed too, not anymore... However there are Spirits, and anyone lucky enough to be born a Summoner gets one... Pity you aren't lucky.. 
          
          And not just that, Sui gets to watch all these tropes happen to everyone else
          The Harem/Forbbiden Romance/Enemies to Lovers
          The guy your fiance left you for? Yeah he gets all three? Your former fiance is a commoner while he is a noble, the checks off the Forbidden Romance box does it not?
          The OP Powers? Yeah those went to your best friend, a jack of all trades in magic and seemingly a prodigy in each 
          

Creepy-Face

Long Lost Child of a Great Bloodline: Turns out your adopted little sister was the Long Lost Child of a Northern Duke
            The Chosen One? That happens to be your cousin, who was born with the Goddess's mark/magic that hasn't been seen in a hundred years..
            A Mentor? That went to your Next Door Neighbour, they had a kid around your age, you always played together, considered him family to a degree. He wanted to be a swordsmen, and for his passionate dream he got a retired swordmaster, the former famed general of the country, and the right to be his sole pupil
            A System? They still do not exist, however your older brother happened to be one of lucky souls to be a Summoner, only one out of every fifteen thousand people. 
            
            Slowly Sui's hope of being a Hero, is replaced by a cruel irony... As if the world was laughing in their face.. And slowly the confident, curious, hopeful, ambitious, almost arrogant boy slowly fades into something much more quiet, much more bitter... before melting into a happier acceptance, at peace with their reality, and content with who they are. It just takes a bit to get there..
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Creepy-Face

I have another idea! 
          
          Motivation: Clover reincarnates as a minor villain, and realizes from memories or other bits of information that the OG was never truly evil... Just someone in desperate need of ◇therapy◇ or ♡communication♡... So after that Clover grows curious, they start trying to find out if other Villains are truly evil or misunderstood.. In the end they find both. 

Creepy-Face

May I ask why both your stories have a step-mother, step-sister, and I'm assuming a dead Mother? Also how of your stories are fantasy themed?

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe The weekend got busy? Or did you just not comment on them?
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Hope You Enjoy! Can't wait for the weekend!
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Nezothe

@Creepy-Face Will do ill do it on the weekends. thank you
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Creepy-Face

Another idea! Is this too much?
          Awkward Reunion: so the Villains are trying to get their hands on these magic daggers, ones of light and darkness hidden away in an illusion dungeon
          Both the MC's Group, and the Hero's Group decide to go stop them
          Noted both groups know the villains are going to be there, they have no idea the other group will be there, and this setting works best if the MC was a villain to the hero in the past
          The MC either because he thinks the Hero is somewhere else, or just doesn't consider these Villains to be the Hero's villains doesn't even question if the Hero will be there
          The MC's group gets their first, they leave out some members to act as bodyguards and watchdogs, as the rest of them go to solve the illisionary puzzles
          The Hero's group and Villain's group arrive soon after
          The MC'S group only knew the Villains were coming, same with the Hero's group
          So the Bodyguards of the MC's Group fight the Hero's Group
          Eventually the rest of the MC's group retrieve the daggers
          Now I imagine one of two things happening, the Bodyguards either capture the Hero's group as hostages which leads to the awkward reunion of the MC and Hero
          Or the MC's group leaves, they get the daggers, send out a signal and dip
          The reunion happens a few weeks or months later
          The MC is taking their group to their hometown, or they are just stopping at inn, or sonething out of the sort
          The Hero also decides to go to an inn, or the hometown, or something of the sort
          They meet there, the Hero's group recongizes the Bodyguards, the Bodyguards recongize them, this meeting is even mlre dramatic if they are currently at the Hero's families house, having some tea and biscuits
          The reason this works best if the MC waa a villain to the hero in the past, is because if the MC was on good terms with Hero, the misunderstanding could be sorted out quickly,  if they weren't on good terms, it'd be on site
          
          
          

Creepy-Face

I have another idea!
          I hope you like it, if it not pretend it doesn't exist till you forget it! Or just ignore this if you want.
          
          So this is connected to any idea where the reincarnated MC and 'Hero' go on seperate paths, they don't see each other for years, and maybe every 5-10 chapters you get to see how the Hero is doing
          And how the MC is screwing over the plot, maybe you could even do a comparison
          Like every five chapters the MC writes down what should be happening in the plot
          Then you write down what's actually happening to the Hero
          And then give an explanation to why, or just a hint, let the readers speculate 
          And then reveal it all later, or reveal it to the readers
          As they will have more info then the Hero or MC in a sense
          
          
          

Creepy-Face

Hello, again! 
          I had a few more ideas, and I wanted to share them before I forgot.
          You can ignore or read them, but if you do I hope you enjoy! 
          1. Longing: Cris is reincarnated into a story or game they like, this game holds value to them, whether it'd be because this was the last thing they had of a loved one, or it simply got them through a hard time, and they are thrilled to be in the story, but the plot is changing. The world is no longer the one they knew, no matter what they do.
          2. Guilt: Mimi is an author that reincarnated into their story, and though there story was a cheesy fantasy romance with no solid plot, they traumatized a lot of characters, and the fact they did that to real people is killing them.  In some ways they try to make up for it, or maybe they just don't believe they deserve anything good.
          3. Villain's End: Yui learns the future, the one depicting their dear demise. They found it in an ever-changing book, it has both the past and possibilities. So Yui will use it to escape their fate, but as they alter their destiny they may lose themselves in the process, as they finally found out how everyone viewed them.
          4. Unaware: Sou reincarnates, into a book, one they never read, or were only at the beginning. So they are currently at the mercy of a plot they don't even know.(Even worse if they have a system giving them quests related to the plot, the plot they don't know)(and of there is another reincarnator, wondering why the hell everything is changing)
          Also these ideas aren't completely original,I was inspired

Creepy-Face

Would you mind if I share some ideas with you? They are just thoughts, nothing solid... 
          I just wanted to share them..
          
          I hope you have a nice day
          
          And I hope you like my ideas if you want to hear them, if not then I hope you hear something else wonderful
          
          Thank you for reading this, you are an amazing author

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Well even if you say you aren't good at writing action ones, I would say you are quite good.
            Also is 'All he wanted now is peace' your only sad one? Or should I prepare my heart for the others?
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe okay, I'll make sure to check out your Patreon. 
            And thanks. 
            Did you mean to say you weren't good at writing action?
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Just remembered another
            When earth was hit by the meteor it wasn't just going to wipe out the dinosaurs, but the entire planet
            So a deal was made, as a God or Celestial or Titan or Spirit of other world agreed to save earth
            On the condition that every century or millenia 
            Earth gives the other world both it's magic(if earth has magic) and souls, prodigies of sorts
            Those prodigies will then be reincarnated into the other world
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Creepy-Face

After TNBS is finished will you do another story?

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe well I can't wait for your next story. 
            When do you think you will finish editing?
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Nezothe

@Creepy-Face Hello, yeah TNBS is actually completed now (draft) just have to edit and finalize. I already have new story in mins but probably, 'll post it after TNBS. You can see the cover in my patreon collection, the title is He now only wanted peace.
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