Nezothe

TNBS is basically completed, just have to edit.

Creepy-Face

Another question about 'All he wanted now is peace'
          
          
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          I just realized I assumed Aosh would regress, but there is no confirmation it would ever happen... So, is Aosh not going to regress? He is not going to be saved? Is he just dead? Is this story going to show what led up to it, and people's regrets, but never give him another chance? 
          
          I am fine if this happens, I just want to mentally prepare is all.. 

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe I can try to help if you want
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe I am sure you will figure it out, and if not there are always other stories you can write
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Do not apologize, you are busy, and I am unimportant 
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Creepy-Face

Also I have a theory for 'All he wanted was peace' 
          
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          Okay, so here is the theory: 
          After Aosh regresses from his first suicide(or is saved from it) 
          Aosh makes a friend
          I imagine Aosh will try to commit for a second time, in my head it is on a bridge, at night
          But before he tries to achieve death again, someone stops him. 
          A girl, she just starts talking to him, he tells her what happened(maybe just in hopes she'll leave him be), and for once someone believes him 
          She convinces him to leave the bridge, and they get ice cream. 
          She is from a rival school, and overtime Aosh wants to go there too, to leave all this behind. 
          The two become quite close, and one day the girl is being assaulted, Aosh sees this and tries to protect her
          In the end the girl is knocked out, and Aosh is blamed..
          Eventually the girl wakes up and tells them Aosh was just trying to protect her, maybe even tears his parents a new one, in anger revealing how they met.. 
          (I have a feeling the girl might resent Aosh's parents for never taking his side...) 

Creepy-Face

All he wanted now is peace
          
          I have some questions about it:
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          1. Chapter Two is not apart of the Collection yet, I am assuming this is a technical error? 
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          
          2. Beyond Aosh's presumed regression after he commits suicide(he will regress right?) will there be any more fantasy elements?
          
          
          
          3. Will we get to see people's reaction(his family, the cops, fellow students, the girl, etc...) after he commits suicide? Before the regression? 
          
          4. Will his name ever get cleared?
          
          5. I am assuming his family is going to start treating him badly because they believe he assaulted the girl, will their relationship ever be repaired? 

Creepy-Face

Here are a couple more ideas!
          I do want to write some myself, I think it would be fun
          1. Lackey: You were a Lackey to a villain, or at least that was your role before you transmigrated. To set an example there were trials to get into the Academy, best of the country, nobles or commoners. The only requirement was that you needed magic, aura, etc... In these trials the Hero faced many villains.
          1. The Cheater-the one who tried to cheat to pass the trials, but crimes were brought to light by the Hero
          2. The Betrayer-the character who betrayed the Hero to pass the trials
          3. The Brat-an arrogant character of a powerful family, has a bunch of Lackeys, and believes everyone is below them, including the Hero.
          The MC was the Lackey of a Duke's Son, before the transmigration they would agree with every word of the Duke's son said, due to their dirty work, always praise them, harassed the hero, etc... Just to get discarded once the Duke's Son enters the academy, which is around the time the MC transmigrated into the Lackey. At this point they are kind of like Neal, their role in the story was done. They were a nameless Lackey, a minor villain who never made it pass the trials arc. They were nameless, and now they get to write their own story! Bonus points if the MC is surprised the Hero even recognizes them when they finally meet, or if the Hero just does not remember them
          2. Escape-like before you are transmigrated as the Lackey of a Duke's Son. The only problem? You are still currently the Lackey, which means you have like a 50% chance of being beaten up by the Hero. Which means you either need to endure the beating, or figure out how to get out of being a Lackey without receiving the Duke's Son Wrath.
          

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3. Redemption-you are reborn as a Lackey, the trials are finished and done, but the Duke's Son did not pass, status didn't save him.. He is now the embrassment of the Ducal Household, and all of his Lackeys have left him, well, except you... Maybe it is because you are still putting your memories together, maybe your parents forced you, but you are stuck with the Duke's Son. But maybe because of their failure to pass the Trials, the Duke's Son starts to change, become a better person, and you get to watch it all..
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Creepy-Face

Are you still planning on reading my ideas? It is fine if you do not have the time, or don't want too anymore. 

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Don't apologize
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Nezothe

@Creepy-Face Btw your ideas are all amazing. It would be waste if you also dont write some of it for your own!
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veyavie

Did something happen to the cat? 

Nezothe

@veyavie I hope you are doing okay as well!
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Nezothe

@veyavie hello, thanks! We're fine just that cat retired and wanted hoomans to be the one working while the cat just rake the glory.
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veyavie

@veyavie hope you are all doing okay
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Creepy-Face

I have more~ I hope you like it! If not you can ignore it, or tell me to stop. My feelings won't get hurt or anything, I just like to share. 
          
          I hope you are having a lovely day, and that this is fun to read! 
          
          Fate of Cliches:
          You know those cliche fantasy stories, all of their lovely tropes?
          Well Sui does, and after reincarnating they except all the tropes to fall on them:
          The Harem and/or Enemies to Lovers and/or Forbidden Romance:
          The OP Powers
          Being A Long Lost Child Of A Great Bloodline
          Chosen One/Hero
          The Mentor
          A System 
          Just to have every trope he hoped for to be none-existant or inverted:
          A Harem/Enemies To Lovers/Forbbiden Romance? Your fiance broke up with you, left you for another guy.. More like lovers to enemies, and sadly due to your damaged heart you kinda didn't sneak out anymore romance.. Let alone with an enemy, or anyone that could fit forbidden romance..
          OP Powers? Actually you have a chronic condition that makes your body like glass, it will break if you push it
          Long Lost Child of Some Great Bloodline? Sorry buddy, it seems like you ain't leaving your unknown middle class status anytime soon. 
          Chosen One? You have neither the powers nor the prophecy to ever dream of being called one
          A Mentor? Sadly, you just get a guy that seems to know less about magic than you do. Seems like you are up for a solo journey..
          A System? Sadly those do not exist in this dimension... They are not allowed too, not anymore... However there are Spirits, and anyone lucky enough to be born a Summoner gets one... Pity you aren't lucky.. 
          
          And not just that, Sui gets to watch all these tropes happen to everyone else
          The Harem/Forbbiden Romance/Enemies to Lovers
          The guy your fiance left you for? Yeah he gets all three? Your former fiance is a commoner while he is a noble, the checks off the Forbidden Romance box does it not?
          The OP Powers? Yeah those went to your best friend, a jack of all trades in magic and seemingly a prodigy in each 
          

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Long Lost Child of a Great Bloodline: Turns out your adopted little sister was the Long Lost Child of a Northern Duke
            The Chosen One? That happens to be your cousin, who was born with the Goddess's mark/magic that hasn't been seen in a hundred years..
            A Mentor? That went to your Next Door Neighbour, they had a kid around your age, you always played together, considered him family to a degree. He wanted to be a swordsmen, and for his passionate dream he got a retired swordmaster, the former famed general of the country, and the right to be his sole pupil
            A System? They still do not exist, however your older brother happened to be one of lucky souls to be a Summoner, only one out of every fifteen thousand people. 
            
            Slowly Sui's hope of being a Hero, is replaced by a cruel irony... As if the world was laughing in their face.. And slowly the confident, curious, hopeful, ambitious, almost arrogant boy slowly fades into something much more quiet, much more bitter... before melting into a happier acceptance, at peace with their reality, and content with who they are. It just takes a bit to get there..
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Creepy-Face

I have another idea! 
          
          Motivation: Clover reincarnates as a minor villain, and realizes from memories or other bits of information that the OG was never truly evil... Just someone in desperate need of ◇therapy◇ or ♡communication♡... So after that Clover grows curious, they start trying to find out if other Villains are truly evil or misunderstood.. In the end they find both. 

Creepy-Face

May I ask why both your stories have a step-mother, step-sister, and I'm assuming a dead Mother? Also how of your stories are fantasy themed?

Creepy-Face

@Nezothe The weekend got busy? Or did you just not comment on them?
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Creepy-Face

@Nezothe Hope You Enjoy! Can't wait for the weekend!
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Nezothe

@Creepy-Face Will do ill do it on the weekends. thank you
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Creepy-Face

Another idea! Is this too much?
          Awkward Reunion: so the Villains are trying to get their hands on these magic daggers, ones of light and darkness hidden away in an illusion dungeon
          Both the MC's Group, and the Hero's Group decide to go stop them
          Noted both groups know the villains are going to be there, they have no idea the other group will be there, and this setting works best if the MC was a villain to the hero in the past
          The MC either because he thinks the Hero is somewhere else, or just doesn't consider these Villains to be the Hero's villains doesn't even question if the Hero will be there
          The MC's group gets their first, they leave out some members to act as bodyguards and watchdogs, as the rest of them go to solve the illisionary puzzles
          The Hero's group and Villain's group arrive soon after
          The MC'S group only knew the Villains were coming, same with the Hero's group
          So the Bodyguards of the MC's Group fight the Hero's Group
          Eventually the rest of the MC's group retrieve the daggers
          Now I imagine one of two things happening, the Bodyguards either capture the Hero's group as hostages which leads to the awkward reunion of the MC and Hero
          Or the MC's group leaves, they get the daggers, send out a signal and dip
          The reunion happens a few weeks or months later
          The MC is taking their group to their hometown, or they are just stopping at inn, or sonething out of the sort
          The Hero also decides to go to an inn, or the hometown, or something of the sort
          They meet there, the Hero's group recongizes the Bodyguards, the Bodyguards recongize them, this meeting is even mlre dramatic if they are currently at the Hero's families house, having some tea and biscuits
          The reason this works best if the MC waa a villain to the hero in the past, is because if the MC was on good terms with Hero, the misunderstanding could be sorted out quickly,  if they weren't on good terms, it'd be on site