I am rereading enforcing boundaries, and I can’t help but express how much I love your writing style, it’s so refreshing and comforting, there are many great stories out there, via Wattpad or whatever, but sometimes those stories get lost (to me at least) because I dislike the writing style so much. Your writing is so clear and you put details on the *right* things, you don’t overly detail everything, which makes all the details (no matter how small) all that more special. The dialogue between characters sound like people actually talking instead of this weird thing that happens in lots of other writings (it’s not awful and I might do it too on accident) but it’s where the characters say phrases that people don’t normally say out loud, but you could write it as what the characters are feeling or thinking. Something like “The crisp ever glow of the cooling lake is beautiful.” Not that the sentence isn’t bad, but it’s not something I hear most people actually saying out loud, that kind of thing sounds like it’s describing a scene instead of it being a conversation starter. Anyway, (sorry for my tangent) reading your writing is a breath of fresh air and I hope you find success in your writing life, I hope to read many more stories from you. Thank you for bearing with this overly long compliment!
