Hey I tried to leave a message with my phone but it didnt work. So I will rewrite it. I read your story and the plot was good, the grammar however was hard to get past. Im not saying that to be mean because trust me, I know editing your own story is hard and it is easy to overlook your own mistakes. I believe that your story will get more reads and follows if it is edited. If you want i could help you? Just message me and let me know.