Nialls_hoe93

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Ok so I'm writing a book. A serious one. About cousin rivalry. Here is a snippet of it. "I don't want to just make him lose, oh no, I want to make him lose his fucking mind. I want him to feel like the world is ending before his eyes and there's nothing he could do to save it. Every time something goes wrong a petunia will be left. Oh, Vincent you have no idea what's going to hit you. You will pay for everything you've done. For everyone you ever hurt, and I'm going to sit back and enjoy every spiteful second of it."
          	
          	I've got about 1201 words down which according to word doc. is 4 pages so do yall want it or not. (It doesn't have a title yet)

Nialls_hoe93

this message may be offensive
Ok so I'm writing a book. A serious one. About cousin rivalry. Here is a snippet of it. "I don't want to just make him lose, oh no, I want to make him lose his fucking mind. I want him to feel like the world is ending before his eyes and there's nothing he could do to save it. Every time something goes wrong a petunia will be left. Oh, Vincent you have no idea what's going to hit you. You will pay for everything you've done. For everyone you ever hurt, and I'm going to sit back and enjoy every spiteful second of it."
          
          I've got about 1201 words down which according to word doc. is 4 pages so do yall want it or not. (It doesn't have a title yet)

Nialls_hoe93

I think at least one of you has read Malign Disposition, so let me tell you this. The author updated almost every single chapter so should I re-read it or? Cus like maybe she just change their names or something yk? Added an A/N?....idk what do you think?

Nialls_hoe93

Ok has anyone else read the first book of quiet and just couldn't continue the series or is that just me? If you did not read Quiet I DO NOT reccomend it. Here are some spoilers as to why I DO NOT like or reccomend it: btw TW
          
          
          
          
          1. Harry r@pes her.
          
          2. Pedophilia (he's is 20 something and she is 17)
          
          3. Ok this reason is for my personal preference BUT THE SMUT IS SOOOO BAD. they don't explore any kinks whatsoever she never sucks his dick and he never eats her out it's always dick inside pussy and then BAM that's it.